Energy buzzing
as I move closer,
anticipation humming
as I reach out.
Proximity amplifying
the charge that’s
between us,
becoming more
than a promise
as we grasp this moment.
Possibility simmering
as we move closer,
potential realised
as we reach out.
© Sara Murray, 27 April 2017
Lovely! That’s the feeling of positive potential in a nut shell. Captured! #ThePrompt
Very tense, I enjoyed it!
Love your take on ‘potential’. That’s what I love about #ThePrompt – it’s open to interpretation.
Definitely.a potential was felt when reading X #prose4t
I saw the picture of the skateboard and thought your poem would be about a child learning to ride one. But now I think it’s more about the buzz of lust and anticipation. Love that poetry can be interpreted in different ways! #prose4t
I love your take on this! It really feels to me like the beginning of a positive relationship. Thank you for linking to Prose for Thought xx