The Prompt: Surprise

The Prompt 18: Surprise

A long, hard slog.
Hot and heavy, stiff and sore.
Months of tiredness turning to exhaustion.

Harder this time,
A sense of something different.
Your age, they say.

Questions, questions.
Do you know what?
You must want?
Wouldn’t it be lovely?

Maybe this time it will be a girl.

Questions, questions.
Why would it matter?
Why do you ask?
Why should I mind?

Expecting, expectations.
Two beautiful boys…
Three beautiful boys,
Expected.

Arrival.
All planned, relaxed.
A date agreed, elected.
Calm.
But, more questions.
Really, I don’t mind!
Practiced and sure.

Theatre becomes theatre,
Comedy moments, a student tumbles.
Attention shifts.
I’m still here, you know!

Sudden laughter, exclamations.
‘Look what you’ve got!’
It’s a girl.
Surprise.

mumturnedmom


You can find this weeks #ThePrompt linky here. What has surprised you? Do you like surprises? Link up and share with us!

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20 thoughts on “The Prompt: Surprise”

  1. It’s funny how people just assume you must be simply desperate for the opposite sex when you have two the same… We didn’t mind either and were really surprised at our 20wk scan when we found out. Fab little poem, as always xx

    1. And, the number who commented after that we had our perfect family now, as if another boy wouldn’t have made that the case! Drove me nuts :)

  2. Ha! It seems that a few of us immediately thought about finding out our baby’s gender as a classic ‘surprise’ (its the one surprise in life that you can anticipate and derail I guess!). X

  3. Fab post Sara, people always assume that you MUST want a girl don’t they? You couldn’t possibly be happy with all boys! *eye roll* drives me bonkers really. Fab post about a lovely surprise though :) xx #theprompt

    1. I do, she might be a pain in the proverbial rather a lot of the time (personality, I keep telling myself!) but I do smile :)

  4. Ah this is lovely Sara. I’m with you on keeping the sex a surprise. My third was also a different sex to the other two but I so didn’t mind what I would be having…..it annoyed me that everyone assumed we were hoping for a boy this time! Nowt as queer as folk ;)

    1. mumturnedmom

      Thanks Suzanne x It amazed me, before and after, how every one assumed that a girl was ‘better’ as we already had the boys!

  5. So sweet! This post captures the beauty of birth.
    I’ve got three kids as well – two boys and a girl, but my girl is the eldest. We found out each time although that was more to sate parents who were frantically knitting booties and hats. We didn’t mind either way with number 3, who was a surprise for different reasons!

  6. Oh Sara this is fantastic! I love it. And so glad you got your girl. A perfect perfect family you have all complete now!!! Love this #prose4t

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